Just when I think I've got it nailed... I find out I don't. Why is it you can never see the failings in what you write? I always think "This time, I'm on a winner", send it out, and the feedback is "Well, if you only fixed this, it'd be much better." LOL. Darn, I thought I had fixed it.
This time it's showing not telling. It's been my bugbear since I started along this writing path. I thought I'd beat it, honestly I did, but it seems not.
So back to my story, with a highlighter, and find all those places I took the easy way out and "told" what was happening.
The learning continues... the highlighters wear out... but surely I'm improving!!
This time it's showing not telling. It's been my bugbear since I started along this writing path. I thought I'd beat it, honestly I did, but it seems not.
So back to my story, with a highlighter, and find all those places I took the easy way out and "told" what was happening.
The learning continues... the highlighters wear out... but surely I'm improving!!
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