Saturday, October 15, 2011

The Learning Continues

Just when I think I've got it nailed... I find out I don't. Why is it you can never see the failings in what you write? I always think "This time, I'm on a winner", send it out, and the feedback is "Well, if you only fixed this, it'd be much better." LOL. Darn, I thought I had fixed it.

This time it's showing not telling. It's been my bugbear since I started along this writing path. I thought I'd beat it, honestly I did, but it seems not.

So back to my story, with a highlighter, and find all those places I took the easy way out and "told" what was happening.

The learning continues... the highlighters wear out... but surely I'm improving!!

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