Wednesday, January 6, 2010

Waiting... like sexual tension

Waiting, waiting waiting. That's me at the moment. I open my email with half-dread, half-longing. Is it possible that I could win the December contest? I would love to and I thought the story was strong. The downside is that I don't have many friends or family to vote for me... and it was down the bottom of the list so it may not have got too many votes.

It's like the build up of sexual tension. Usually you get to breaking point and then... orgasm. And that makes it all worthwhile!! But what if the sex is bad? What if you have to fake the orgasm? Was the sexual tension worth the effort then?

4 comments:

  1. cate nigiollachriostJanuary 14, 2010 at 11:12 PM

    Where is this story? Can we read it yet?
    Writing is a tough trade. your own satisfaction and the feedback from appreciative readers
    are the first things to aim for. Money? Forget it - there are better ways!

    regards (another)Cate

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  2. Wow Cate... you're my first comment! I haven't publicised this site as I was trying to get a webpage up as well (not had time for that yet - slack me!).

    My story was on the Mainstream Erotica website in their erotic stories in December. It was called Pain Surfer. I don know if it is there still. Their website is www.mainstreamerotica.com

    Once I get my website up, I was going to have some short stories on there as samplers. If I'm lucky, I may get it done soon!

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  3. Beautifuly written, Cate. Pretty explicit, but you set the mood so well and make all that happens seem inevitable, unavoidable. You convey passion very well. And that rock near the end! Ouch!

    Regards,

    Cate

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  4. Thank you so much, Cate. Your comments are much appreciated.

    Cate

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