Body language... it's the missing thing in my writing. Those gestures that mean someone's interested in you. Those little peeks, touches, movements that tell you to continue the pick up. I was missing them in my story ... but I'm getting them now.
A necklace with a pendant lying between breasts is a great thing to toy with to draw attention to your bust.
How about those looks that trail across lips a little longer than necessary?
What about the discrete touch, at first on the arm or hand, and then more intimate.Sometimes using the excuse of looking at clothes or pendants...and fingers brush flesh... enough so the recipient knows it was intentional but no one else is aware.
So many little things happen in the pick up. Now I just have to write them.